{"id":3872,"date":"2021-05-20T14:51:45","date_gmt":"2021-05-20T13:51:45","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.manchester.ac.uk\/humteachlearn\/?p=3872"},"modified":"2026-10-14T14:49:22","modified_gmt":"2026-10-14T13:49:22","slug":"essay-writing-assessment-criteria-036","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.manchester.ac.uk\/humteachlearn\/2021\/05\/20\/essay-writing-assessment-criteria-036\/","title":{"rendered":"Using peer assessment to improve essay writing skills &amp; understanding of assessment criteria"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>[et_pb_section bb_built=&#8221;1&#8243; admin_label=&#8221;section&#8221; fullwidth=&#8221;on&#8221; next_background_color=&#8221;#000000&#8243; _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243;][et_pb_fullwidth_menu _builder_version=&#8221;3.0.106&#8243; menu_id=&#8221;7&#8243; submenu_direction=&#8221;downwards&#8221; fullwidth_menu=&#8221;off&#8221; background_layout=&#8221;dark&#8221; module_class=&#8221;main-navigation&#8221; \/][\/et_pb_section][et_pb_section bb_built=&#8221;1&#8243; _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243; prev_background_color=&#8221;#000000&#8243; next_background_color=&#8221;#1d1d1d&#8221;][et_pb_row _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243; background_size=&#8221;initial&#8221; background_position=&#8221;top_left&#8221; background_repeat=&#8221;repeat&#8221;][et_pb_column type=&#8221;3_4&#8243;][et_pb_post_title _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243; meta=&#8221;off&#8221; featured_placement=&#8221;above&#8221; featured_image=&#8221;off&#8221; \/][et_pb_text _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243;]<\/p>\n<p>Dan Rigby (Economics, SoSS) describes how he sought to improve students\u2019 essay writing skills and understanding of the assessment criteria.<\/p>\n<p>Dan had 1,200 First Year students due to write their first Economics, and for many their first University, essay.\u00a0 To prepare them for this, he uploaded two past essays to Blackboard with the Assessment Criteria.<\/p>\n<p>He set up Blackboard Groups (maximum of 25 students per group) corresponding to a schedule of Zoom sessions with a tutor to review\/mark the essays.\u00a0 Students were required to have reviewed and marked the 2 Essays using the provided Assessment Criteria.<\/p>\n<p>Dan wanted to incentivise students to review the essays and avoid the problem of students booking in without having done the work.\u00a0\u00a0To this end, he set the bookings area as Adaptive Release in Blackboard, so that the students could only book into a session if they had completed two Blackboard Assignments.\u00a0 The Assignments comprised, for each essay, entering:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>3 strengths<\/li>\n<li>3 weaknesses or areas for improvement<\/li>\n<li>predicted mark<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The Zoom sessions started with an introduction from the tutor, then students went into Breakout Rooms to discuss the strengths and weaknesses for each essay and discuss their predicted marks.<\/p>\n<p>Demand far exceeded expectations \u2013 c.600 students completed the Assignments and booked into a session over a two week period.<\/p>\n<p>The feedback students received on their essays later in the term followed the same structure of three strengths and three weaknesses\/areas for improvement.<\/p>\n<p>[\/et_pb_text][et_pb_accordion _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243;][et_pb_accordion_item title=&#8221;Evaluation \/ Student Feedback&#8221; 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Developing students\u2019 understanding of grading complex written work through peer assessment.<\/p>\n<p>Tai, et al (2017): Developing evaluative judgement: enabling students to make decisions about the quality of work.<\/p>\n<p>[\/et_pb_accordion_item][\/et_pb_accordion][et_pb_comments _builder_version=&#8221;3.17.6&#8243; show_avatar=&#8221;on&#8221; show_reply=&#8221;on&#8221; show_count=&#8221;on&#8221; background_layout=&#8221;light&#8221; header_font_size_tablet=&#8221;51&#8243; header_line_height_tablet=&#8221;2&#8243; custom_button=&#8221;on&#8221; button_icon_placement=&#8221;right&#8221; button_text_color=&#8221;#ffffff&#8221; button_use_icon=&#8221;off&#8221; parent_locked=&#8221;off&#8221; button_text_size__hover_enabled=&#8221;off&#8221; button_text_size__hover=&#8221;null&#8221; button_one_text_size__hover_enabled=&#8221;off&#8221; button_one_text_size__hover=&#8221;null&#8221; button_two_text_size__hover_enabled=&#8221;off&#8221; button_two_text_size__hover=&#8221;null&#8221; 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